[acrynick]

Just finished doing this 6 page comic, got inspiration from "watchman" graphic novel. have a look and drop by a word. Ok gotta rest....tired.

this is the first page



this are the remaining 5 pages, if you plan to see more

http://www.geocities.com/refreshingmind/comic/2.txt

http://www.geocities.com/refreshingmind/comic/3.txt

http://www.geocities.com/refreshingmind/comic/4.txt

http://www.geocities.com/refreshingmind/comic/5.txt

http://www.geocities.com/refreshingmind/comic/6.txt

[Mon]

Impressive work, it certainly got my attention. Your style reminds me of McKean's in "Cages". I hope to see more from you.

EDIT:
You've got a great website, lots and lots of interesting pictures! I must recommend anyone who's seeing this to check it out, it's well worth a visit.

Cheers!
Mon
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[Socar MYLES]

VERY nice sequential art, and the story seems fascinating! The one thing that's a bit of a downer is the lettering--it doesn't fit, and it's very hard to read. I had to squint to read those tiny wee gray letters. A slightly bolder font in a dark sepia tone, I think, would work a lot better--you'd still avoid boring ol' black and white speech bubbles and caption boxes that way, but the readers wouldn't have to squint as much.
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[Tomasis]

too much frames and too a little happening.. i could not read the texts easily.. but your style is cool.. I like it.. I hope that I can see of your works more
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[Tzan]

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Oh well, guess I'll try later.

[acrynick]

Well, now thanks everyone.

Have trouble reading ehh. Haahaha sorry for that the resolution is quite low. But hey I�ll correct it as soon as possible. The lettering which seems to be the problem�.now, hahah. I was trying to use a serif type face because it relates to news paper lettering, as the story is related to it�problem found�hard to read, learn a lot. I was wondering between serif and non serif fonts? Hope someone can clear my mind from this.

Tzan- sorry for that, I would like to get a better host but have no money. Hahahah. Yah try again later, it always happen. Sorry.

Mon- Thank you mon, this is my first approach to comic. Glad that you like it. I don�t know anything about comic either do I know who is McKean but I will check him out now, Thanks for comparing him but I know I am nothing compare to his talent.

[Benny]

a lively caricature