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merlyns
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hi there!! I just finished these two.
tell me what you think.
-david
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merlyns
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 7:43 am |
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my server is having some problems. keep trying and it I'll work.
-david
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 9:22 am |
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I'm just going to comment on your first one. I like that you used several different colors for the skin tone. Nice job there. The biggest problem I see is your line work. If you're going to keep it in the final work, then it needs to be more solid. Right now it looks very, very sketchy. I suggest that you ink it before you color it and get rid of the pencil.
Both of these are a good effort. |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 10:13 am |
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Hey merlyns
I think you have an unique sketching style and these are very cool.
Not sure if you are going for the more of a Manga style or more real, if they are more towards the real maybe the eyes are a bit big and perhaps the pictures are a bit skew, something I have problems with too.
When I draw I usually flip the paper I am drawing on against a lamp or sometimes using a mirror.
Kind of why these old Marvel dudes like Scott Mcdaniel and some other dudes uses a Lightbox, they can both flip and draw over a sketch and it should come in handy real good, maan.... I need a lightbox 
I hope some of it was good tip.
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merlyns
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 12:18 pm |
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thankys for replying.
well I suck at lineart. I need to prectice on that.
the first pic is a sorta manga/realism mix
thanks matthew for pointing out that the eyes are to big, I didn't notice that.
-david
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Daniel Chou
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 12:30 pm |
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Well they look good. but u need to work on your figures. Keep it up! 
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merlyns
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| Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2003 12:55 pm |
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this is a quicky..
-david
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merlyns
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| Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2003 11:22 am |
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3 new ones. these are made quickly.
all of these are studies and stuff. nothing serious.
-david
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| Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2003 8:12 pm |
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| Your first sketch didn't show up, but I like the girl's hair in the second sketch quite a bit. |
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