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alti
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 Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2003 10:40 pm |
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a concept that i'm working on ,, of a battleship that can grow it's armour from it's hull.
i crave feedback so please comment if you have anything to say..
also a teckship landing ..
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SpeeDFX
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| Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2003 11:45 am |
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| Very nice linwork and I can tell you have some really awesome ideas. The only problem with the picture is that I dont really know what is going on, I can't tell what is the top of the ship or what is the side, which way it's facing. I think you need to add some more shadows on bigger areas to put more depth into it. OR, maybe vary the line width in comparison to major areas and detailed areas... |
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Eelco de Vlieger
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| Posted: Sat Mar 22, 2003 2:07 pm |
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HI Alti,
I replied at www.conceptdesignforum.com.
Last edited by Eelco de Vlieger on Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:13 am; edited 1 time in total |
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UkiTakuMuki
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| Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2003 6:25 pm |
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awesome concept!
the sketch is a little too sketchy for me though... are those really huge?
i wanna see some guns and such ;p
other than that i dig the muscle-fiber things alot!
EDIT: oh.. those ARE huge.. just saw those little men lol |
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