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Ilija junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Aug 2002 Posts: 5 Location: Germany
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2003 1:35 pm |
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Hi.
I have not posted here a long time.
Heres something new. I am not going for a spectecular Painting Style with this Picture, but I am trying to show some Atmosphere.
I�d love to hear what you think about it. Would be great to get some tipps how to improve the Atmosphere.
Thanks for every help.
Regards,
Ilija |
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Hunago member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2002 Posts: 154 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2003 2:33 am |
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Didn't realise why the pic was titled 'afraid', then after some time I twigged that those whales are after the tiny fish?
Here are few thing you might try differently:
The whale on the right could be bigger and take up more of the picture space. To make the interior of its mouth feel more menancing, mayhaps you could darken it some more. for the mouth some sharper details or color contrast could bring it more forciably to the view's attention.
Also assuming this is underwater, adding a bit green or bluish tinge for your palete might help the cold/lonely atmosphere. |
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