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Lennon Legend
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2003 5:17 pm     Reply with quote
Er yeah, this is something I'm working on for my art course type thing, I was just looking for some feedback on it... so er here it is



Aint my usual type of thing to draw but when you're given a suggestion on the course work I guess it's best to take the advice and just do it, I'm not really sure how I ended up with what i did, but I guess it doesn't matter.

It aint finished, I need to colour it and shove something on the right hand side, but I was wondering what people might think of it so far, I want to make it look good, so all suggestions/criticisms are welcome...so er yeah...
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2003 8:49 pm     Reply with quote
very intriguing Smile I love it.. i dont know if you want a total surrealistic-realismm.. but i'd suggest changing the hand holding the pick -its a bit out of form..

I think it looks good.. just go bolder Smile (sorry if it looks bolder in person.. I'm just going by what it looks like on here)
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2003 2:20 am     Reply with quote
Pretty cool Smile
Are you going to color it?
I agree the hand and guitar pick look weird because you are seing too much of the guitar pick making it seem like its flat with the guitar. But besides that all is well and funky. Looks very interesting Very Happy
If you color it though, post it up. It is hard to see everything clearly and the whats exactly flipping around on the pic because of the lines (maybe happened when you scanned or maybe touching it up too much with contrast?).
What is that in the water btw? Looks like a double headed hat and a peircing bead or something. Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2003 4:54 am     Reply with quote
Love the amount of interest you got going on here, kept me looking for a while.

The reason the pick looks funny is that when you normally hold a pick you would see the thumb and not the first finger like you have.

Looks funky though.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2003 7:09 am     Reply with quote
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The reason the pick looks funny is that when you normally hold a pick you would see the thumb and not the first finger like you have.


oh yeah..oops Laughing


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What is that in the water btw? Looks like a double headed hat and a peircing bead or something.
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To be honest I'm not too sure myself Laughing , I was just trying to stick something in there so I went to look at some of my other drawings I've done for the course and I saw that, I think it was some kid's badio controlled boat that had got stranded in the river..and a football I think, not too sure, the right side looked way too empty do I just thought I'd shove anyhting in there..
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