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Basement bound
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I am still trying a few things out. I started with strickly photocopying, and moved to some paint addition. Now, I have broght it to the computer. Not sure, if I like it or if I should go back to the basics again.
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| Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2003 1:28 am |
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I think the halftone pattern as the shadow for the lady is a bit too loose..
if the lady casts shadow, how come the box she's sitting on doesn't?
I'm not very well versed with that photocopy sort of style.. so that makes me unqualified to give any comment on your work.  |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 27, 2003 11:07 pm |
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Nice, her pose and overall design works well, I like it. Is photocopy art something like making different layers first then print everything onto one paper in separate passes?
A few things:
Her right foot was left out of the page. move everything to the right a bit might also improve the composition.
The dots for shadow are too big perhaps, maybe finer dots would work better on her face and skin? |
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| Posted: Fri Feb 28, 2003 11:06 am |
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Jeromoo- your right I should pay more attention to the shadows.
Hunago- It is a cut and paste, draw, paint technique using a photcopyier to compile all of them together. This one was put together on the computer, but everything was photocopied at least once. You also right about the dot tone. I should make them smaller.
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