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Ornicar
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ceenda
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 8:50 am |
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This is awesome!
Crits:
1) It seems a bit odd how the edge of the distant building curves in a little just above her head.
2) The shading on the pale part of her skin seems a bit flat.
Otherwise, great work! Really nice pic.  |
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gLitterbug
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 9:34 am |
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Very nice!
ceenda�s comment nr. 1 is true though, even if you intended that the building is getting smaller there again, just like on top of the picture.
Apart from that it�s really sweet! |
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 9:49 am |
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" ... Mistress of the dark
I now know what thou art
Screams haunt my sleep
Dragged from nightmares thou hast wed together
Lamia and Lemures
Spawned thee leche
To snare my flesh
Portrait of the Dead Countess ..."
o yea .. is the lyrics of "A Gothic Romance (Red Roses For The Devil's Whore)" by Cradle of Filth ..
so i love vempire tales and draws .. are my favorite theme ..
love the piece ..
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paws_of_gt
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 5:41 pm |
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Only thing I don't like is the red cross, it seems outa place, or lacking as much detail as the rest of the work. The rest is awesome and inspired work. (:
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Frost
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 7:06 pm |
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| Great work Ornicar. |
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lunayasha
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| Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2003 6:27 am |
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I love the lighting and background scheme it really amazing. I hope you have a story to go with it. 
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2003 6:58 am |
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Nicely done.
The background kicks ass.
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