[requiem-on-acid]

Hi, again, i didn't experiment much with ink, computers and stuff, i was always fooling around with my pencils and sometimes a used a little paint. well, this is my first ink picture.....



C&C PLEASE!!
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[Randis Albion]

Typical for Sijun...
Those who need help don't get any...

Didn't you know that you must be a highclass professional to get feedback?

it was ironic, sorry.

I think you should work on the anatomy a lot.
The Arm seems to be ok, maybe to amsll but ok.
The rest is deformed.
You should not waste time in inking now or color, whatever. Zty to make as much skatches as you can daily. Try to sketch real things, don't use comic style. Try to copy some photos or some objects in your room. You have to learn to see the mistakes by yourself, so don't be lazy. Take a look at her legs, you can see that they are not right, so why not change it?
Try to fix as much as you can by yourself and post the new version here again.

Randis ::
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[requiem-on-acid]

Yeah thanks for the comment, I will sure try that but I've never ever drawed comic styles before, Mostly I did portraits, and i'm still very young, but I never want to do comic again but thanks :p
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