[pritch]

Here are a few drawings I've done in the last couple of days. There are a few little things that I know could be improved upon, but overall I'm fairly pleased with them. Just looking for some c&c and overall opinions. Thanks.

[Tinusch]

Not bad. The first one doesn't appeal to me too much, the linework is a little stiff and the comic book hatching looks a little forced, particularly in the closest leg. The second one is very, very impressive, though. She's a little bulky in the neck, but it's still a very good piece. Looks like you did it in pen, as well? That can be a very daring medium to use, and I think you handled it well.

[pritch]

Man, I wondered where this post went. Dropped pretty fast, though I guess that's what happens when nobody responds. Oh well.

Thanks for the comments Tinusch. Something I feel I've had difficulties with is stiffness in my drawings sometime. Always rushing to get it done and not staying flexible and free with my drawing. The second one, actually both of them, are ball point pen. I just happened to scan the second one in color because I felt like keeping the color instead of making it b&w.