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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2003 7:43 pm |
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My piece is finally done ...
the internet's 1st Hip Hop cartoon...episode/trailer 1
enjoy @ http://www.reakshun.com
FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS and GIVE CRITS & COMS...
Peace |
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ChiaNi member
Member # Joined: 11 Sep 2002 Posts: 516 Location: Chicago
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Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2003 7:57 pm |
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I love it. great story, music, don't know how to say it. English not enough to descrip. Just wonderful. _________________ Holly sprite |
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arniemg member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 2000 Posts: 107 Location: Pensacola, FL, USA
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Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2003 8:39 pm |
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very nice job! good drawings, good animation. |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2003 9:34 pm |
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Thanx, Chiani and Arnie... |
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SolarC member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2001 Posts: 274 Location: Barcelona
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Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2003 11:13 pm |
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Must have been shit loads of work to accomplish something like that! Respect! |
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Bilbo member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2000 Posts: 356 Location: Israel
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 3:35 am |
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Cool! some really nice shots and frames in this clip. i have to admit that it was a little hard to follow ,what with all that action all over the place... but maybe i'm just getting too old for this.
two small things which i found slightly problematic- it takes too many clicks and popups to reach the actual movie, and that tiny "watch the movie" button is ,well, tiny. and slightly illegible too.
And finally - since it's a hiphop movie, i think the music should be encoded with a higher bitrate, it's annoyingly lowquality at some instances.
Good job!. |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 8:07 am |
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Solar C: Almost 2 years in development and a finally a couple months of animation and BAM...Thanks...glad you liked it.
Bilbo: I feel you on the WATCH THE MOVIE tag...it is small and kind of illegible. You are the 2nd person to say the quality of the music was "choppy" we'll say and you're right...for a HIP HOP MOVIE...this is suppose to be banging!! My webmaster is on it!!
As far as the story goes...LOL...yeah, you might be a lil' old...everybody else is following along. No pun intended...just messin' with ya.
Peace |
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-HoodZ- member
Member # Joined: 28 Apr 2000 Posts: 905 Location: Jersey City, NJ, USA
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 8:16 am |
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hey i didnt know this was going to be flash...i was thinkin in the lines of Penny Arcade style...its got a nice flow to it, did you lend you voice in this? |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 9:08 am |
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some really great direction in this flick.. I have one crit tho..
the sound.. the sound seemed almost too loud for the movie.. so it gives this distorted sound.. and It didnt sound very good.. I wanted to hear what they were saying and I most of the time I couldnt..
anyways thats my crits.. good job on it tho.. |
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Marckus junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Jan 2001 Posts: 12 Location: Tyres�, Sweden
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 9:09 am |
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Yo Reakshun!
Man that was fat!
When will the continue come.. and the music... man .. really hard
More of that thing man !
/Marcus |
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 9:45 am |
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i haven't actually read it because for some reason it opened up about 12 copies of my browser, odd. (mozilla1.2b) |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 1:01 pm |
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Hoodz: Thanx, gee. Yeah, I did the evil dude's voice as well as my cartoon self. Of course, I had to do the music as well. btw, what exactly is Penny Arcade style?
Awetopsy: good lookin'. I knew you would like. Yeah, the sound.. I've gotten more complaints about it and I'm on the webmaster...he says it's something in the flash file so i might have to upload it again after tinkering with it for a sec.
Marckus: Yo, it's all for the love of da arts: hip hop, graf, b-boy, etc. The next episodes will encompass all of those...I'll keep you posted. Holla at me.
Simoom: I don't know about that one... first instance...
I'm @ school right now on break...I'll check with everybody later..
Peace |
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-HoodZ- member
Member # Joined: 28 Apr 2000 Posts: 905 Location: Jersey City, NJ, USA
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 1:33 pm |
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Double post....
Last edited by -HoodZ- on Wed Feb 05, 2003 1:34 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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-HoodZ- member
Member # Joined: 28 Apr 2000 Posts: 905 Location: Jersey City, NJ, USA
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 1:33 pm |
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Quote: |
what exactly is Penny Arcade style?
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i thought it would be comic style
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 9:27 pm |
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ahh...yes, that's an idea though... weekly comix!!!
Good lookin' out... Hoodz!! |
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Mon member
Member # Joined: 05 Sep 2002 Posts: 593 Location: Uppsala, Sweden
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Posted: Wed Feb 05, 2003 11:48 pm |
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Awesome Reakshun, just plain awesome! great job
cheers
/Mon _________________ www.mattiassnygg.com
Blog! |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 8:52 am |
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Cheers 2 you, Mon! |
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Inner Vision junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Feb 2003 Posts: 1 Location: West Haven, CT
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 9:00 am |
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Hey man, this shit is dope. I'd like to offer you some of my music for use in your next release for promotion of my next album.
check out mp3.com/genetic to hear some of my stuff _________________ ------------------
inner vision . iCE
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pritch junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Jan 2003 Posts: 36 Location: Ohio
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 10:29 am |
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Sweet! I gotta agree with everybody else, the only thing that could use improvement would be the sound. You should be able to just up the bit rate in the flash prefereneces to improve the sound quality(though it'll increase the size of the swf.
I've been working on my own online flash comic/animation for a while now and it's a lot of work. I say comic/animation cause it's gonna be less on the animation side and more on the still images side, at least at first.
Anyway, great work and I can't wait to see more. |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 1:42 pm |
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Yo, pirtch, I will tell you it was hell puttin' this together especially with Flash being kind of limited and all. i just had to do it though...doesn't seem like Hip Hop knows animation is another medium in which to express itself.
Just do what you can. I had a lil' opportunity so I took it and this is what happened. Still...moving...shitty...whatever...just as long as you get your point across
Sorry about the sound...the web guy told me he can't do anything about it...
I'll resolve it in the next ep.
Peace. |
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Mb junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2001 Posts: 45
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 4:27 pm |
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Try opening it in Mozilla (1.2.1). "Fun." |
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aColdOldKodiak member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2002 Posts: 298 Location: California
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 9:21 pm |
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awsome work.. very good design. Indeed it's a bit hard to follow, but if you really want to try, you can. _________________ http://jcaart.cjb.net |
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[Shizo] member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938
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Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 9:37 pm |
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I didn't understand anything at all hehe. A mixture of flash, anime, and graffiti. |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 9:09 am |
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mb: don't know what mozilla is? explain...
aColdOld: thanx for even trying...at least you met me half way!
Shizo: maybe we should smoke together...just playin'. |
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Mb junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2001 Posts: 45
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Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 7:14 pm |
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um Mozilla is an open source browser based off of Netscape technology (or are Netscape's browsers based off Mozilla technology? I can never remember.)
In any case, opening your website using Mozilla spawns an endless number of new browser windows. (Which is strange, because Mozilla's popup blocker should stop that sort of behavior.) Needless to say, it was impossible for me to even view your site, and after its incredibly annoying behavior, I no longer want to view it
edit - A link, if you'd like to try it yourself: www.mozilla.org |
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Reakshun member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 302 Location: left coast
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Posted: Fri Feb 07, 2003 7:34 pm |
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try Explorer maybe? |
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