[Hase]

allright... it all started out with a little innocent doodling around (which I thought looked promising):




then after much too much fussing about it looked like this (which was completely horrible because the face turned into a uniform kind of mush):



then I tried to do a quick fix and it came out like this:



so what do you think? personally I think the last is half-presentable, but it�s still off in a few regions I can�t quite put my finger on. any C&C would be much appreciated.

[eyalyab]

personally, i like the first one the best :/
i think you should take the first one and maybe try to fix his lower lip a bit,
give it more depth with darker and lighter tones
maybe some flaak in the background...