[Drawnblud26]

I'm working on a t-shirt design and I need some feedback. I don't usually draw charactatures, so I need to know if this looks okay. I've included the sketch with some ref pictures.

and the Refs


Any help will do! Thanks!!
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[xmmx]

huh cute


I know it�s supposed to be a characture but I think making the facial features smaller would help out a lot
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[Inspector Lee]

I agree, smaller features would make it feel more child-like. You should also be using the proportions of a childs head (you've used the proportions of an adult/manga head). An adults eyes are just about halfway down the skull, while a childs eyes are somewhat farther down the skull (depending on their age). In other words children have much more forhead and brain-pan space above the browline than an adult (proportionally). I'd even exaggerate that, since it's a charicature, and I'd make the head bigger in relation to the body (again to make it feel more child-like). Also a little thinner neck (O.K. a lot thinner). Children have pretty delicate little necks compared to what you've drawn. Don't get discouraged though, charicatures are very hard to do well.
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