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kosta55555 junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2002 Posts: 43
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Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 3:30 pm |
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2003 9:36 am |
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I like it, but her left eye is a little bit more higher than her right eye. I have the same problem, last week I had this charcoal sketch I was doing and the eye�s had to be fixed a couple of times.
keep upthe good work.
Peace and cheers
Matthew |
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CwStone member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2003 Posts: 489 Location: New York, USA
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2003 1:05 pm |
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Yea mathews right. But it looks like her just the same. GJ |
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juhis_r member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2003 Posts: 62 Location: Helsinki, FIN
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Posted: Tue Jan 28, 2003 3:00 pm |
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hi kosta55555!
Nice to see other people's Arwen/Liv portraits.. Here is our thread:
http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?t=31428
Okay.. I agree with Matthew about the eye case. It's a little bit higher. But the totality is good. It looks like Arwen.
I think you could draw more shadows and highlights to get the contrast between dark and light tones. It gives you a better impression of the tridimnesionality. Study different shading tehniques by probing at other artists work. You just have to draw and draw and still draw to get better. I am working daily by myself.. Hard work.
And I have a tip for you. If you want to see the flesh tones better, convert the color image to grayscale version and study it that way. You can see the tones much easier.
You did a good artwork indeed.
Thank you.
- Juha _________________ J.p.
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kosta55555 junior member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2002 Posts: 43
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2003 6:31 am |
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I fixd it in photoshop im toooo lazy to erase the eye and draw it again.
iw you wanna see more works http://www.angelfire.com/art2/bykosta/
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