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kosta55555
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 3:30 pm     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 28, 2003 9:36 am     Reply with quote
I like it, but her left eye is a little bit more higher than her right eye. I have the same problem, last week I had this charcoal sketch I was doing and the eye�s had to be fixed a couple of times.

keep upthe good work. Smile

Peace and cheers
Matthew
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 28, 2003 1:05 pm     Reply with quote
Yea mathews right. But it looks like her just the same. GJ
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 28, 2003 3:00 pm     Reply with quote
hi kosta55555!

Nice to see other people's Arwen/Liv portraits.. Laughing Here is our thread:

http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?t=31428

Okay.. I agree with Matthew about the eye case. It's a little bit higher. But the totality is good. It looks like Arwen.

I think you could draw more shadows and highlights to get the contrast between dark and light tones. It gives you a better impression of the tridimnesionality. Study different shading tehniques by probing at other artists work. You just have to draw and draw and still draw to get better. I am working daily by myself.. Smile Hard work.

And I have a tip for you. If you want to see the flesh tones better, convert the color image to grayscale version and study it that way. You can see the tones much easier.

You did a good artwork indeed.

Thank you.

- Juha
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kosta55555
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 29, 2003 6:31 am     Reply with quote
I fixd it in photoshop Wink im toooo lazy to erase the eye and draw it again.


iw you wanna see more works http://www.angelfire.com/art2/bykosta/
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