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Tsmith2010
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 Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2003 7:43 am |
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Nice pic.
The only thing that bothers me at the moment is the perspective ont he shield. It seems a bit too 2dimensional compared to the angle his hand is at. Other than that nice work.
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| Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2003 1:00 pm |
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Thanks Tarandon!
Yeah I agree the sheild comes across flat, looking at it again. Not the right angle for the hand. Plus it would be more dynamic if it wad at an angle anyways! I will try to touch it up. Thanks. |
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| Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2003 1:07 pm |
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Actually, the Shield is not bothering me that much, maybe he's about to drop it to the floor before holding the hammer with two hands...who knows.
What is bothering me is the hammer, it's locked in his left leg in an weird way. I would try to move it away so we se more of the leg and the hammer wouldn't be paralel to it. Also try to make his left hand a little bigger than the right to acentuate the dimensional space.
Hope this helps
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| Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 12:34 pm |
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Making the left hand bigger is a good point. Making the drawing have more dimension!
Thanks ZeeWire. |
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