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SteelStorm
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 Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:09 pm |
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Wow I just can't seem to get better jpegs of this one, they all suck for some reason.
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:16 pm |
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if that sucks... then my art is a complete waste of time... :p
I think this is pretty darn good. my only issue is the face and her groin.
something about the face seems kinda flat... like she doesnt have much of a chin.
and the groin seems like its not part of her.... like its not placed quite right.. Im not sure tho... |
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| Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 6:37 pm |
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| the color and shading are nice, but you have a lot of anatomical issues to work out, especially the length of the robotic arm and the size of the hips |
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 7:40 am |
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The composition and painting are top notch!! However, compared to her body, theres no deffinition in her neck. Like shes holding her head back. Or chubby without the chub.
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SteelStorm
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 5:27 pm |
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I swear to god there is more definition to her neck, chin etc. in the .psd file. The jpegs just kind of 'smoosh' all the skin tones together.
I think she doesn't have quite enough hip either, but, you can't work on these pics forever!
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