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Sexyugly
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Hello everyone!
I am new to this site as well as I am new to digital art. At the moment, I am trying myself in vector illustration so you can see. I know I am pretty far from all these beautiful works posted here. But I would appreciate your comments and critiques on my work. It is not very advanced, not very �anatomical� but this is what I would want to do: create fashion, girlie illustrations.
Thanks
btw: the border on the left side will be modified i am aware of it edginess  |
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Capt. Fred
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| Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 7:15 am |
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very stylish.
Cool!
Looks like you got what you wanted  |
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 7:26 am |
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Whoe, I love the style as stated above. The colors and composition are professional. Looks like something Id see in a fashion magazine (like Cozmo.) Only thing I can mention is the buildings in the background, Everything else is so well deffined, and easy to look at. The buildings are kind of smooshed together/blurry with all the overlapping. I feel it takes away from a great image. Other then that, ROCK ON!
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Sexyugly
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| Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 7:31 am |
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Wow! Thanks guys. I am astounded, it seems it is not bad then.. You made my day (I am still building my first portfolio which i am going to send into big world soon and hope to make some money).
About buildings, I thought it is sort of adds movement to the pic, but maybe you are right i will change transparency to normal and see what happens.
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Sexyugly
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 4:14 am |
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| AndyT: why you can't see it . It still here I can see it |
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AndyT
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 4:23 am |
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I just see a red cross.
And when I enter the url of the picture I get a "document not found" message!
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Sexyugly
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 4:53 am |
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AndyT: Hmm, I do not understand what it is...
ok here is link:
http://www.sexyugly.fromru.com/gifts.gif
try, i hope this one works.
Now, after we both made so much effort for you to see my image you "must" write a comment
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AndyT
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AndyT
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 11:30 am |
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That does work
Great style! I agree. Totally reminds me of some of the illustrations at Shane Glines Drawing Board. Not just because they might be done in Illustrator too. (Yours are done in Illustrator, right?)
DeviantArt!? It's a community. You can register there and submit pictures. Others can comment on your images and more important: you can show the pictures you have submitted there @sijun.
And I would be able to see them... 
But the www.visualartarray.com link works as well.
And I guess my humble opinion is not that important anyway. 
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Sexyugly
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 2:21 pm |
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AndyT: I managed to register in DeviantArt but unfortunately, my Norton Firewall doesnot let me to acsess the DeviantArt community. And I do not want to remove it... 
thanks for comment anyway. But still why other people see my work but you are not?...I do not understand |
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AndyT
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 2:45 pm |
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Wow! You really tried? Thx!
I did not want to cause inconvenience. Sorry
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| thanks for comment anyway. But still why other people see my work but you are not?...I do not understand |
True! That's strange. Maybe I'm not the only one! Am I the only one?
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