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jcterminal
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 Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 7:53 pm |
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i'll be posting the rest of them as they are done, and i'll be posting the WIPs occasionally over in the WIP forum.
there IS a print ready version, but i'll be nice to the modem users here and keep it to myself.
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Matthew
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 5:17 am |
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Well I gotta say that she cheered me up now before the holiday, nice wings. 
Merry Christmas
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egerie
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 2:08 pm |
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NUDITY WARNING !!! 
Nice metalic wings but they could use some refining / sharpness. Did you mirror them ?.. |
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mindlesswraith
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 2:32 pm |
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| egerie wrote: |
| NUDITY WARNING !!! |
NWS is an acronym for "Not Work Safe". It means nudity and not to click on it at work/with parents around/at school etc. |
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Jeise
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 5:44 pm |
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It's quite good, I especially like the background. However I also have a few crits. Perhaps it goes with the character (seraphim) but I personally would add some more colour to the skin tones. Right now they are pretty drab you know? Also, the hand are sort of odd looking, particularly the pinky fingers. Just bring those into the other fingers a little and they'll look less like jutting claws.
Also: she's so skinny man! That's just sorta grossin me out you know? Beef her up a bit, and perhaps make her hips one flowing line, instead of a couple more muscular looking ones.
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jcterminal
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| Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2003 4:11 pm |
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| Jeise wrote: |
It's quite good, I especially like the background. However I also have a few crits. Perhaps it goes with the character (seraphim) but I personally would add some more colour to the skin tones. Right now they are pretty drab you know? Also, the hand are sort of odd looking, particularly the pinky fingers. Just bring those into the other fingers a little and they'll look less like jutting claws.
Also: she's so skinny man! That's just sorta grossin me out you know? Beef her up a bit, and perhaps make her hips one flowing line, instead of a couple more muscular looking ones.
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hey thanks for the detailed crit. very cool.
you should be interested in knowing i'm still working on that project... and i'm about halfway done.
http://x.nerdnet.com/portfolio/project_seraphim_neo.html
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| Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2003 5:59 am |
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I concur with jeise, and I'd like to add that the skin looks like's been painted using dodge and burn. I don't now if it's the case, but it actually looks like it needs more color variations on the shadows and highlights
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| Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2003 10:08 am |
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| I dont mean to be nit-picky but seraphim angels have 3 pairs of wings. |
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