[ke_kit]

I know. She's not original at all. We aint gonna use her for the game we're on, but I thought she might be cute, so I finished her.



C&C vould be apreciated...
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[tayete]

Too small pic to risk my claps or crits...
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[ChiaNi]

click on the small picture you can get the biger image.
I like it. nice and clean.
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[Al Ian]

The composition of the image is great!! However, compared to the rest of the line art quality, the face and sunglasses dont seem to fit.

The costume and position are pretty good though!
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[Awetopsy]

the cheek bone.. I mean.. Wow.. thats one huge cheek bone, lose the line on the left side that pronounces the cheeckbone... in the smaller version, it makes her look kinda.. well... male.

and her neck is like a straight pole.. add some concave curves to that neck... make it seem more natural.. not so stiff.

And finally, dont try to hide the hands. try to draw them.. shes a soldier standing in the pose of a victorias secret model. maybe put the hand in front of her leg.... or holding a helmet or something.

other than that I think the composition is cool, and I love the legs and feet.. very well done.

and thats a pretty cool font.

keep at it, its easy to see your in the right direction.

[cptoonz]

I like the image, neat design. Interestingly, from the thumbnail I thought "the cheek bone looks a little large"...but from the full sized image it looks real good. I like her pose and the coloring job you did. Conceptually the pelvis harness seems a little uncomfortable, but what the hey...
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[ke_kit]

Here's a wallpaper remake...



Thanks to everyone for the crits. I realy appreciate that...
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