[Avels]

First post...

[paranoid?]

Thats a sweet picture

my only comment would be that blood isn,t that bright n_n
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[fungi]

very nice, i love the look of those beasties. nice atmosphere too.
blood needs to be darker

overall nice pic
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[Tinusch]

I like it a lot. I think the lower torso of the guy in the foreground is a little muddy, just below the abdomen. It gets a little bland and undefined, and that shadow cast across it suggests he is completely flat at that section, which conflicts with the angle of the upper body. Also, I think the effect of a hazy day would be better achieved if the haze affected the guy in the background a little.

[Sumaleth]

Great first post.
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[InitialT]

That's a very nice painting.

Now I'm definitely not saying you copied because it's pretty obvious you did this on your own, but I found a creature design for a miniature game, called VOID, with a remarkable resemblance to your painting. Check it out here:
http://www.miniforums.com/gallery/void/void_010903.jpg

It's pretty amazing how two people can come up with very similar things completely on their own. It seems you're both drawing from the Naga mythos a little.

[Avels]

Thanks for all the Crits guys...I wanted it to still feel loose and unfinished, hence the splashes of red...