[fungi]

This is not my drawing but i i did the colouring. this is my first attempt,
tell me what you think now its complete



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[B]

wraith,. heh nice job

[JickyJak]

Thats pretty good for a first attempt. I think what I like about it is the fact it doesnt have the typical comic style digital color feel to it.There is some texture which is nice.

Where it lacks is force. The colors are rather bland, and flat, perhaps more tonal range or some higher highlites if you catch my meaning.

The background appears kinda like an afterthought as well. I would ask yourself... "is there anything I could do to spruce it up (paint in a quick bg or something)?"

Its far too common to just drop in a gradient IMO.

Overall though some nice work for your first attempt.

What is the artist's name? Its problably a good idea to give credit to the artist.

Cheers.
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[fungi]

thnx for the nice comments and crit, i can see wat you mean bout the bland colour and the background.

im sorry to say i cant remember where i had the piture from whoever did it though rocks at drawing anime

thnx again
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[Matthew]

Yeah, cool texture and characters.

[fungi]

well here i tried to get rid of the blandness and added a new background, well what you think?



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