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Kazesama · junior member Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2003 Posts: 11

I'm both newbie in those forums and in CGin.
any contructive comments and criticism are more than welcome ^^

This fisrt artwork is actually copied from artwork for Kingdom Hearst, but I actually did everything on this pic, from the lineart to the Cgin.

This second one I tried doing cel-shading, and I think it's not that good, the backgroung is kinda crappy
that's the original penciled work :

and here's the CGed version:

As i said before, any comments and crits welcome ^^ As I'm a begginer I'm trying to improve and I think people here give constructive comments so...

[666]Flat · Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2003 8:38 am

Regarding your "beauty" pic: I think I wouldn't have the patience to do pics with such an amount of detail. Nice.
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Kazesama · junior member Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2003 Posts: 11

I don't know if it's because my art sucks that I don't get any answer
I would really need coments and crits so I can improve my CGin

Rainmaker · junior member Member # Joined: 30 Dec 2002 Posts: 9

viewing that stuff is a bitch, dude. Get a better host. I dled one of em, figured out the right extension, and by then I didnt care to say anything!

What I did see wasnt bad, though. I dont have time to look at it again...
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Ahnya · Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2003 6:01 pm

So uhmmm.. how are you supposed to view these?

dann82 · Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2003 9:06 pm

i'm using ie 5.5, and i just had to click on them... dunno what the problem is

i think the 'beauty' pic is really cool. i get the impression it's supposed to be a stained glass window, but would like to point out that stained glass patterns NEVER match exactly - ie. the dress of the chick. I think that perhaps the only tweak that I would do would be to alter the patters a little so that they were not so perfect.
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Digital Jackass · Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2003 10:03 pm

You just click and drag the link into your title bar.

Ahnya · Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2003 10:40 pm

Oh, must have been my pc acting up. They work now. I know ive seen the stained glass one before but now that its been mentioned i do think you should alter the colors on some of the glass peices to make it more realistic.
And on the other one, on the cg one i think you could use a bit more shading on the clothes. Im not very experienced with cell shading myself but the colors seem a bit too intense....

Max · Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2003 2:25 am

I like the first one very very much!
Lens flares normally don't make a pic better.
Only if you exactly know how to use 'em!

Kazesama · junior member Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2003 Posts: 11

could somebody tell me how I'm supposed to make the pics show up like right on the post so I don't have to link to crappy Angelfire ?
that'll help all people having trouble to view the pics ^^

Max · Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2003 4:55 am

[img]http:// pictur url [/img]

puppy god · Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2003 3:55 pm

now that i can see it its really good its the paradigm of geometric percision. . those circles and everything. . it must of taken forever. . . curse me and my unsteady hand. . .and my lack of a compasasses
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