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Andromeda
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 Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2003 1:06 am |
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what do you think ? ...
i know the clouds suck, and the rays of light coming outta it is totally wrong, but thats why i post this here ...
how can i improve this ?
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robust
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| Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2003 8:06 pm |
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Ehm , i dont know if you want the cartoon:y style , but i would love to see a version that isn't so flat , shade it. And the colors seemed alittle ... washed out, try making them more eye catching. That's my tips , the picture it self was very nice , you have talent.
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Inspector Lee
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| Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2003 10:37 pm |
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Your composition needs some more darks. The whole thing goes from a value 0 to about a value 4, which is one of the reasons it has that flat unsaturated look.
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Merystic
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| Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2003 10:27 pm |
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Definitely shade it. Maybe adjust the saturation too, I agree with the above comments.
You have a nice drawing style.
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