[neff]

Ehrm, the lineart isnt that good, but its the coloration im practising...

damn english, i'll never learn it
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[nubizus]

i dont know.BUt try to mix some colors.exmple:in area of shadow may mix all colors in dark .
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[william willette]

dude; shes a dude, no... just wrong...
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[neff]

are you mokking me?
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[Simoom]

the head is too large, but mostly too broad, makes her somewhat masculine. But like you siad, the line art isn't what you were after in this picture. I'm not really sure where she's being lit from. but I like your use of values on the pants especially, it nicely portrays the reflective plastic material. the skin tones, especially on her midrift are good.

so you did a good job on the coloring, and the line art in and of itself isn't bad, it just needs to be worked on a bit

[Asurfael]

Colour usually looks far better if you pick the colours yourself instead of using dodge/burn tools (not sure you used them, but it looks a bit like the glossy mark they leave). Also, about the lineart... The hips look rather masculine as well, being tiny and lacking roundness. The hips should usually be almost as broad as shoulders, or depending on style, even broader. Some people can make it work with small hips though, but even then it needs added roundness I like the colours you picked, and the textures look neat as well, only the glossiness is kind of bothering.
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[neff]

Thank You
Yes u r right, i use the Dodgetool for some highlight, but then i pick up the color from the dodged zone and paint it with the airbrush, arg its to mighty, i have to use that tool, its strobger than i...


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[neff]

Okay, next one, now more, ehrm feminine things, i dont like the face, but girl's faces are hard for me ;-/



Edit.. and the foot, yes i know, ...damn anatomy
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