[Periadam]

I'm not sure how I like this one yet. There are problems with it that must be fixed, and I thought I'd post it to get some feedback... just in case you guys can see something I can't.



I'm not sure how I like the face... there's something off about it that's been bugging me.
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[piter]

that is awesome... the colours and mood are amazing. reminds me of my experiences with ultima underworld for some reason...
even though the face and hood could stand to be a bit more realistic, i wouldn't change it simply because it goes with the stylized fantasy look.

[ZeeWire]

I love the tree in the background and the lighting of the scene, real nice.

The problem with the face I think it has to do with the shadow. it's too linear down the center,the forehead should fade out in a more gradual way and should not stop suddenly in the center.

Another point to make is the light source, the way the face it's lit, it seams that another light source is present. otherwise the whole face should be in the shadow. By having this other light source present, it should also be reflected more on the right fold of the hood and other parts.

To really make this image pop-up maybe it just needs a little bit more work on the path & plants as well as a more detailed bark on the tree trunk to the right. I would also love to see the 4 straight trees in the back done with the same dynamics that you applied to the main background tree. They intersect in the back of the figure in a strange way.

Anyway, you did a great job so keep it up!
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