Sijun Forums :: View topic - THAT SHOULD LEAVE A MARK (babe getting shot)

topeira · Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2002 1:40 pm

im about to color this. it looks OK to me besides a few things. i just wondered if anyone has ideas for improvement befor i go on.

i need some crit with the mouth, the eyes maybe, and the bent leg. maybe the palms.
p.s. - the sword will be some kind of a lightsaber so it's not detailed on the blade

in case it's not clear - this babe is getting shot from behind which will probably leave a mark on her right lower abdomn.(the shooter is on another pic. i will combine those 2 later)

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Cuddly · Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2002 11:03 pm

topeira, this is an awesome piece of work - love the line art, very Geoff Darrow-ish, neat and clean. Very nice. Love how you've got the bulletholes looking like something's blasted through there without actually drawing the bullet trails and tracers.

The expression on her face is cool, one of shock (about a nanosecond before the pain comes). Love the way the sword is swinging forward with the inertia of her run. Love the pose on the hands.

Her right arm needs a bit of adjustment, the shoulder muscle is a bit long, IMHO. Also, compared to the rest of her, the leg that's hitting the ground would seem to need a bit more detail.

Can't wait to see the second drawing and the final colored pieces. Smile

the_insider · Posted: Mon Dec 30, 2002 12:14 am

maybe it's the mask but her face looks a bit manly-ish
good job on the forshortening view on the arms...yet they need some work
nothin to say bout the legs though---color color color!! i want to see!!
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topeira · Posted: Mon Dec 30, 2002 3:08 pm

thanks for da advices. and i did follow them
her right hand was a lil worked on and so were the face (mouth and eye expression)

this pic here is the refined artline and the basic color sceme, before shading and light effects (the saber is not added yet cuz it ain't colored).
any advice about the colors is wellcomed. i think that the colors of her clothing and skin are ok (and more shades will be added to her skin to make it less plastic and to her clothes) but i will be happy to have more ideas!!

after coloring, the pic should look like the figure of the shooter

the shooter is in this link below

http://grm.m.walla.co.il/briefcase/0004/a/d/a/r/w/i/n/t/e/r/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/r/200212192325097300/200212310038264014/female_-_coloring_1.jpg

after coloring this second figure, a third one will be added along with some BackGround. any ideas as for what kind of BG?
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