Sijun Forums :: View topic - This is my second artwork,a beaultiful girl.pls give advice

cony · junior member Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2003 Posts: 4

face

Simoom · Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2003 2:55 am

the eyes are wonderful, and your detail especially shows up in the second picture. the only problem I see if that her head is too short. I think it stops too soon cause her eyes are too close to the top of her head, so it looks a little like she had the top of her skull removed. Give her a little more brain room and she'll have both a beautiful face and a beautiful mind Wink

Matthew · Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2003 2:58 pm

Wow! Good work. Maybe more brain as Simoom said, but I�m not a pro and should not be listen to. Smile

Matthew · Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2003 3:01 pm

But wait, That could maybe be fixed with moving the highlights on her right forehead, (the hair) up a bit.
Anyway, Very good job. Smile

cony · junior member Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2003 Posts: 4

thanks very much!!!!!!

try hard!! wate my third artwork please!

Reakshun · Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2003 11:21 pm

The face is extremely smooth...soft touch you have...nice. Consider a different more stylized background to match the intricate subtleties of the face. Hair is nice to. The BG will help you with your reflections in the hair.

Negatives: fix that ear...I know you see it. and of course, finish the arm off. This is good so don't just leave it as a doodle. Finish up and post the final. Wink

flowers · junior member Member # Joined: 28 Dec 2001 Posts: 22

Oh ye, she's really beautiful.
Erm, could you arrange a date for me? Wink

Great work!