[kosta55555]

i'd like to hear your opinion

[ViiSolidus]

Lookin good so far if u ask me
All I can c is that the ripples look random, the ones around her chest look kinda scattered not showing a direction or a real purpose of being there, the one on her right arm near the sholder should be moved a bit closer to the head, since the ripple is usually just below/on the shoulder area rather then half way down your bicept

For the chest u might wanna destinguish a direction for your ripples and that way they will look neat, and with a purpose. Either that or dress like a girl and c where the ripples go ehhehee

[kosta55555]

help me i dunno what to do with the other hand . i'v almost did a hole in the paper from all the erasing . its not looking good if ill not draw it at all but i dunnow were to put it

[ViiSolidus]

I say put it where u did in the 1st place, on her stomach, good job on the shoulder fold, lookin much better now, make those on her arm-pit's alot less visible, the hard black line makes em too vivid and king od out of place mby even get rid of da one 1/2 on her right breast

[Capt. Fred]

It might look not bad if her left hand was down next to her hip with her arm lockd out propping her up, since with one arm rasided she's gonna need some balance.

I dunno..

[kosta55555]

[kosta55555]

the color version :]

[Timon]

nice steps
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[dann82]

good progress.

i think that her fingers are a little too skinny, give them a little more meat.

i also think her hair is too matted. will you be adding more detail?
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