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Michael la-Cour
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 Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 9:03 pm |
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Hi guy's.
I was just working on the christmas card I'm about to send to my family.
And I would just like som last feedback, new Ideas, thoughts before I finish it.
What I know need to be done is: The komposition must be changes and the heavy dark outline around Santa should also be changed, so it more similar to the background..
Apreciate any comments
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Groady
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| Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 10:15 pm |
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The lighting is this works quite well. The table is very successful at showing this, very nice. The only thing that really bugs me is his hand doesn't seem to making contact with his face. Maybe look at yourself in a mirror and see how your cheek reacts when rested on your hand. Also the presents in the corner could use a bit of texture but I feel that's just a matter of taste. Good luck! 
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