[r1sm]

heya, this is my very first work, drawed with pencil and edits with photoshop.
i know there are some shadow and geometrical errors, but i just wanted to draw it.
hope the main mistakes are out, that it looks almost correct

c&c are welcome


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[faB]

there's something about isometric that's just cool
2 main problem I see with it:
1. light n shadow, given the shadows, the wall on the right side should be darker because it is not facing the light source, it is at 90 degrees away, then oyu could make strong light , the front of the stair steps, 2/3 of the columns facing, everything facing basically
2. perspective not consistent all around, the big piller to the right at the bottom your line that extends to the horizon is not parrallel to the ones of the shadows

good volume otherwise
if you would add a simple figure somewhere it would give a sense of the scale of the building
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[r1sm]

yeah i know, but im too lazy :Y
cuz it was my first digital painting and ive never done such work in photoshop before. so i just wanted to try how all the others make so nice looking pictures.
maybe i will continue later
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[Link_omega]

Hmm the top of pillars definetly dont correspond to their environments.
Above the pillars the ceiling the direction that you painted celing should all
be in a similar direction so as to indicate depth the brush strokes should be
facing more to the right instead of an inclining angel. not to mention the
roof should of a darker scale according to the direction that your light
source appears to be directing and from the appearance the place where
your steps up doesnt match with the rest of your ceiling direction. Depth
and shadowing as was mentioned appears to be in dire need of thinking.
Try to find a picture or a nearby building with a similar design as what your
drawing. it would help out greatly In my opinion.
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