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Kinten
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hello b&g, long time since last post, here it goes:
I did this sunset doodle yesterday and decided today that i wanted to finish it. Any c&c before i continue?
Cya arround!
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| Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 9:48 am |
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can't see the image.
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Kinten
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| Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 11:39 am |
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Noticed that, the server has been down all day. Trying another one 
I need something to happen, maybe some clouds or a city or something, it's kinda boring as it is now. Any suggestion?
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Inspector Lee
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| Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:21 pm |
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One thing that comes to mind immediately, is that you have only foreground and background, which makes it look very flat. Maybe put a narrow band of very faint (minimal contrast) mountains in the distance, and start the sunset just above that. I think I would also make the rim lighting on the figure stronger and more prominent. Also you may want to check the proportioning on the figure. The legs look a bit thick and a little short, while the upper arm looks like it may be a bit long. Tiny adjustments, but for what it's worth. Otherwise, nice clean colors
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| Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:48 pm |
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The position that the stick touches the ground appears to be slightly behind
your character. maybe a small adjustment to bring it forward.
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Kinten
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| Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:53 am |
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Good points guys! Thank you!
Made a quick update (havnt got so much time to draw) trying to add more depth.
Im going to light up the town abit more. The tree has got some serious problems, any suggestions there? Im not good at drawing trees :/
About the girl, I will probably redraw her, she's to messy to tweak now.
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| Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 10:25 am |
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I like the addition of the clouds and distant mountains, and the tree on the left as well (I like the way it sort of frames the scene). I'd just look for some photo reference on trees to help you there. Overall, nice improvements.
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