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Wiked Ewok member
Member # Joined: 19 Aug 2000 Posts: 215 Location: San Francisco, CA USA
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Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 7:45 pm |
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Here's the final version of this piece. I don't really know what else I can do to it. The colors seem a little dead, I know. Cartoonish, but I don't know how to fix it. Back leg..I couldn't get it right. Been working on this too long.
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The Machine God member
Member # Joined: 20 Aug 2002 Posts: 120 Location: Vancouver B.C. Canada
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Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2002 8:39 pm |
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Poor woman. She's got a huge spiky leech on her back. Heh.
Nice stuff. _________________ Praise the Lard |
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2002 8:03 am |
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Very nice picture.
If you compare to her right breast her neck seems to be pretty long, maybe that is intentional because I guess she�s a Fantasy woman.
Good work
take it easy
Matthew |
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d.a.r.y.l. junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Dec 2001 Posts: 48 Location: sweden
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Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2002 8:16 am |
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she kinda looks like marilyn manson. the pose is rather stiff and its hard to tell what she's doing. her left thigh looks wider than her right even though her left is farther away, and her ass is really round despite she's holding her right leg forward
and what is she doing with her right hand?
lighting could be more dramatic, as it now seems like there is 3 light sources, the moon, the moon light reflecting from the water surface, and another one inbetween. could be cool to skip the last one and play with the other 2..
aside from that, some really nice coloring especially from the spiky stuff! keep it up |
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Yanka junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 2002 Posts: 25 Location: Switzerland
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 12:32 pm |
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Hey, this is awsome! I remeber seeing this earlier in the progress forum i think. I wish I was that good (already..? *g*)
keep up the good work!! |
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