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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 9:28 am |
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Hi. Painted this. Im trying to learn how to draw better... and i know there are many mistakes =( so pls give me comments... and how i can improve it. And what i can do to draw better caracters. =((
or the fullsize at:
http://www.joacim.forss.com/temp/temp1/new/new041.jpg
Thnx... _________________ Joacim Nitz. //EnjoY! |
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 9:54 am |
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Hello
This picture is cool but I�m getting confused with the outside environment.
Is it space or under water?
keep it up
Matthew |
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Bizarde member
Member # Joined: 22 Aug 2000 Posts: 410 Location: Romania
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 11:01 am |
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Hmm ... dosen't look like an alien interior at all. To me appears more like a human space station.
Any way, is nice rendered.
Keep it up! _________________ Bizarde's Gallery @ Visual Art
~florin |
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Vesuvius member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 718 Location: Newton, Ma, USA
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 11:07 am |
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I think by Alien Ship he means ship with an Alien, look up in the ceiling. |
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Deckard member
Member # Joined: 08 Aug 2002 Posts: 120 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 11:08 am |
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Oops, there's an Alien.
I like it, to clean for my taste though, dirty it up, than it will be a masterpiece.  _________________ "It would be quicker to train an APE!"
-- Basil Fawlty |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 1:01 pm |
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Thnx... well.. i know its a bit clean. Thats one of my problems =( i dont know how to go on doing it more... well non clean =( Anyone that wants to show me how.. pls do... =) And yes.. its like a ship under the water... i think =))
Big thnx..!!! _________________ Joacim Nitz. //EnjoY! |
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aColdOldKodiak member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2002 Posts: 298 Location: California
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 4:32 pm |
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only one thing with it, where's the white lightsource coming from? Other than that I like it, the clean look is neato too. Also if it's in space the windows could be more see through. _________________ http://jcaart.cjb.net |
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Curtis junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Nov 2002 Posts: 41 Location: Vankleek Hill Ontario
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 6:40 pm |
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wow i like the way youve done the walls and the subtleness of that alien is cool
good stuff why make it dirty clean is good too |
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ejwize member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 56 Location: Brighton, MA
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 7:28 pm |
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From your post it sounds like you feel like you are weak with drawing. I'll start by saying I think the drawing is not bad... but more importantly, you have a really good sense of atmosphere... which in my opinion is a harder thing for a painter to master than drawing. Drawing just takes practice. Creating a scene / developing an atmosphere is a much harder nut to crack. Some technically excellent artists could learn about atmosphere from you. Great job with it so far! |
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joacim_nitz junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 32 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Nov 24, 2002 7:44 pm |
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thnx for the replys,,, yes my biggest problem is to draw =) but im learning... and i have another question...
Is there anyone who knows a tutorial how to make matte paintings,, ??
Thnx _________________ Joacim Nitz. //EnjoY! |
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