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joacim_nitz
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 Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 7:09 pm |
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Hi. Would like some feedback. pls be nice to me =) hehe.
thnx,,,  [/img]
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aColdOldKodiak
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| Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 10:47 am |
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wonder why noone has replied?
anyways it's a nice looking piece. Very solid in terms of the coloring, great depth. What you're lacking is something for the viewer to keep looking at. You could glance at the picture for all of 1 seconds and get the whole thing and then move on. Details and more things going on will keep peoples attention for moments more before goin.
As for general crits, the two guys with the rifles arn't quite aimed up with the guy without the use of some imagination. Also the space club sign is a little funky looking... sorta bland I guess. Anyways nice piece, it's well done it just has issues with composition and whatnot. imo
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Deckard
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| Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 12:19 pm |
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I like the idea, but it's kind of clean, it needs dirt and more details. 
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Chuckles
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| Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 1:25 pm |
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one word, texture.. then this would look 1000 times better(well depending on how well you can do texture)
concept is great.. |
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