[Reeves]

Hello there!
I've posted this pic before on some other forum [which shall remain anonymous!] and did not get much crticism. I hope you guys can tell me what you think and give me some advice.

Note: This was scketched on a copybook thus the lines! I tried cleaning it...but it was too hard! any suggestions?

[Aidan]

Am i dumb or does the tongue not come out of his throat?

Besides pretty nice piece of work.

[Kuharido]

Yo Reeves , its K@sh =P . Aidan is totally right , and i just noticed that ! => .

[Blind Tree Frog]

It's high on his lower jaw but it doesn't look like it's can't be coming off of his mouth.. Maybe drop it a bit, but I think the tongue is believable... barely.

[Reeves]

Thanks alot Aidon, kuharido, and Blind Tree Frog, I appreciate the criticism. I probably won't have time to work on this until a certain computer of mine decides to work again and I can get a hold of a stylus.

Hey Kuharido! I might take you up on that offer!

Thankx again. I appreciate the feedback.

[SikeSpiegal005]

If you have photoshop you could get rid of the lines very easily. All you have to do is get black as your foreground color on ur tool bar. Then go to select at the top and do "color range". Leave the settings at their defualt and just press ok. Now everything black (your line art) should be selected. Now u gotta go to select again, and click on inverse. Now everything except ur line art should be selected. Now all u gotta do is go in with the air brush/eraser with a big brush and just white wash everything. After you do that, deselect and all you should have are ur black lines.

[Reeves]

Thanks a billion times SikeSpiegal005! Thats exactly what I wanted to hear.
I'm gonna try that as soon as I can. Sounds like it sould work!