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Adonai
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 Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 8:26 am |
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Hey Guys, my first post here, kinda intimidating to post since I've been watching these forums for a while now. Really enjoy all the artwork! 
C&C Please!  |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 10:35 am |
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Hey there, I think the dude is cool.
take it easy
Matthew alias Lensflares |
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the_insider
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Location: DENVER COLORADO--rocky mountains whoo hoo!!
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| Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 11:05 am |
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| i like it,...i guess that its the style you were aiming for right? so im not really gonna comment on the anatomy or anything---onlything id say is work the torso a bit more next time---and last, it's not exactly "said" where the light source is coming from....it looks to me that you just kinda made some shadows and lights here and there randomly so i'd advise you to mind that also...very good non-the-less!! :) |
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paranoid?
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| Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 5:38 pm |
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Nice I think it looks good
But try to put more dept into the tie...right now it kinda looks like its a design on his shirt  |
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chronus377
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| Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 6:43 pm |
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Hey, that looks pretty good for a beginer. My only comment would be to add blood splatters instead of soft airbush blood you have now, maybe add some splatters to the side of his head too.
good luck. |
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