Sijun Forums :: View topic - Shotgun-er

lalPOOO · Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 12:04 pm

This is a sketch I did during school. Started in french, finished in tech.

I just figured I'd share it to get some applause, and of course helpful suggestions for the future.
I most likly will not be altering the line work, so please so do not suggest things that would require that.

if, I posted this before, I'm sorry for posting it again. I can't remeber for sure whether I did or didn't.

edit- shit, I did post this before, in the doodles you do during school thread. rather then take the whole thing down, I'll leave it up for veiwing. Sorry about this.

[ October 26, 2002: Message edited by: lalPOOO ]

tilokani · Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 4:00 pm

Hmm.. the perspective of the gun in his left hand looks a bit shady. Kinda odd, just like a really bad video card par se. And where his right arm connects to his body, it looks off. Other than that, the man is cool.

lalPOOO · Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 4:55 pm

I don't understand what you mean by the way the right arm connects to the body, could you give me a picture or somthing?

Herb · member Member # Joined: 06 Jul 2002 Posts: 78

IE: His sholder.

lalPOOO · Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 12:28 am

uh, yea I got that. I realized it was the shoulder he was speaker of, but I don't know whats wrong, and was asking him (or anyone for that matter) to help me in understanding the problem.
I'm not trying to say theres nothing wrong, I'm just asking for someone to be more spefic.