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toenail
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 6:59 am     Reply with quote


The latest image I did in my spare time at work, got bored of this one though. Any comment welcome, cheers, Rob.

It was based on this sketch I did ages ago



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 7:43 am     Reply with quote
actually thats not half bad.. I quite like it. good work.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 7:55 am     Reply with quote
Looks awesome !!!

But still a bit flat.
There is no real depth.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 8:00 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments, just a quick question, why do you think it looks a bit flat ? Any suggestions ? Should the background be darker, should I add some more stuff into the sky ?
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 10:13 pm     Reply with quote
i like your sketch better...

i dunno why everyone's futuristic cities are dark and gloomy.

dont flippin people live there?

i dunno im just PMSin
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 6:15 am     Reply with quote
OH !...yes..ahmm....
Hard to describe.
I think it would be a good idea to add some dark clouds in the BG.
The shodows of, for example the streetlights and some buildings lack.
You need something to focus on...
Don't know a better way myself...
Yes, it's not easy.

But I have to say that I can't do it half as good as you...so..take it easy !!

- max
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