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Author   Topic : "Cyber Dreaded Elf... again:) need crits plz..."
bld
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 12:42 pm     Reply with quote
Looks nice, the rest of the shirt should be a little more transparent if the nipples stick out like that.
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Kari Christensen
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:29 pm     Reply with quote
Cool character design! I would go ahead and try to do a full color painting of it based on the color skeme you've established. But, I think this looks good if are going for a watercolor/sketchy- loose colored look.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 11:47 pm     Reply with quote
This is my last dreaded character I put only one color but I will to try to put all in color but need crits to put it... and give me crits please..
PS:excuse my english...


[ October 15, 2002: Message edited by: Noctali ]
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 16, 2002 10:40 am     Reply with quote
yeah nice work maybe you can color it now !
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Persocon
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 16, 2002 10:44 am     Reply with quote
cool but put a think behind your elf
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Weirdowe
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 17, 2002 3:44 pm     Reply with quote
the eyes strike me as inconsistent ... as if they were placed differently on both sides of the face
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