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aColdOldKodiak
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I like muffins!
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agent orange
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| Posted: Fri Oct 11, 2002 10:41 pm |
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whOa.. i like the green lights..  |
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Max
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| Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 1:44 am |
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Very stylish !!!
Add more contrast.
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aColdOldKodiak
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| Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:29 am |
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| Thnx for the replies, I'll see about the contrast |
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 2:06 am |
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Little more contrast would be nice, but I'm not one to beat an old horse. I also feel it could use some tighter rendering, but you've got enough details here to get your point across.
I think the concept is great and I love the non-typical robot design. Over all, it's good stuff.
Take it easy,
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sparth
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 2:41 am |
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a very atmospheric piece. a very original design too. bravo  |
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Master-of-Me
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 3:33 am |
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very nize indeed..but im having problem with the details..i had to watch the picture for awhile before i could see the robot and the ppl..maybe that is what u wanted?
but nevertheless i like it.
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Kari Christensen
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 4:03 am |
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| Cool bot design. Maybe there could a little more color in the characters to take some attention away from the background? |
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Loxley
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 4:11 am |
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| Holy shit - that looks like a cortex reaver from a sweet old game...great stuff. |
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aColdOldKodiak
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 1:51 pm |
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Yey! Replies Ok I tried to tightened some loose rendering, (not very much though) but mainly I worked on getting the characters more visable from the background. Thnx for the replies
[edit] btw Loxley it is System Shock fan art.
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NeoFun
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 5:53 pm |
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| Hey wow! I like this very much! The lack of contrast somehow works in this situation. Fix the guy in the absolute foreground though-- Something is off with him. anatomy, ect. |
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Loxley
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 6:07 pm |
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| Again, awesome job. Was crazy obsessed with the game when it came out, and still am. Best fanart Ive seen to date. |
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Fredrik
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| Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 11:13 pm |
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| great, but give it some more contrast, deeper blacks/higher greens |
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ZakatH
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| Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 5:03 am |
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| Cool stuff |
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-HoodZ-
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| Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2002 8:52 am |
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| its hard to make out the form...but i love the smoke |
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