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Hase
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 Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 3:45 pm |
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I did this last night (/this morning), I�m happy with the background and guy from the waist down.. the rest I�m not, but I can�t quite put my finger on it. C&C please.
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IkerCLoN
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 3:57 pm |
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| One thing I can see is that the left arm is too away from the body... |
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mitch
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| Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 4:44 pm |
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| I agree with the arm comment-the shoulder is dilocated. I think the problem your seeing with the hips is that they are disjointed from the ribcage-it looks like his back is broken/the ribcage doesnt suggest a curve into the hips and the hips arnt adjusted to receive that cruve. Draw his spine and it might help. |
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Hase
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| Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 11:23 pm |
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thanks for the input, i guess i got carried away with the black on that ribcage... i didn�t make a sketch first, so it was kinda already too late for the arm. 
what about the figure and the bg, do you think they go ok together? or should the bg be in the same shading style as the figure? |
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