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wayfinder
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 Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 9:31 am |
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hey guys.. i've been working on this track for a few days now, and i'd be grateful for any feedback you guys could give me:
a yet unnamed track
thanks! |
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[Shizo]
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| Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 10:23 am |
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I like the ambience, thought it's a bit repetitive. It could be more interesting if you added anothes high voice or effect. Also the pause is too long for a dance song, and it doesnt seem to get back into rhythm quickly, more like a fade in in the middle of the song.
Thats my thoughts about it. |
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Nilwort
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| Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 11:23 pm |
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The bass riff under the drums at the beginning sounded nice, and throughout the song it changed to fit the rhythm pretty well, allthough the whiney female voice sorta freaked me out, but that's just me...
It almost seemed like there were too many points in the song that it got quiet and then the drums and stuff kicked back in...maybe if you compressed it all to be shorter it would sound more polished and/or engaging. That's what I would've done anyway, keep it up!
[ June 27, 2002: Message edited by: Nilwort ] |
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