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Max · Posted: Sat Sep 21, 2002 12:06 pm

Cool

- Reminds me on these Max Payne comics during the game ( one of the best Pc games )

Max E. Tormer · junior member Member # Joined: 16 Sep 2002 Posts: 25

hey i like

it reminds me of a movie that starts with some fella carring a soldier in his back and he is telling the wounded man "we are gonna make it" in the end the roles changes and the one carring the wounded is been carried and the story repeats it self. nice ambient too bw

NeoFun · Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 12:40 am

Max Kulich-- Thanks. I've never played, perhaps I should give it a try and see what you are talking about.
Max Tormer-- Thank you as well

Neato-- Perhaps I should write a story for my fellow in the snow.

[666]Flat · Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 12:53 am

Nice pic, but what about that crappy font?

deleuran · Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 1:33 pm

I like the black outline on the face, and the pic is generally very good

nice work...(freaky text, kinda gives me the creeps, combined with his look in the eye)

About mr. flat; i don't know if I should laugh or cry...

Giant Hamster · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 1782

...Dead but Breathing?

NeoFun · Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2002 2:00 am

Hey! Even more crits! Thanks!
deleuran-- thank you! Generally good? Anything I should change?
Hamster-- Ya, I'm not sure exactly what I mean by that yet. I kinda imagined this depressed detached guy trapped in the snow making his way towards a broken down church. Kinda like he's spiritualy dead but lookin' for hope. The whole pic came out muted though...
Flat-- I hope you die before your wedding.

deleuran · Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2002 5:23 am

Maybe make the outline a little more smooth, it looks a little "jerky" if you know what i mean.
Besides that, your pic is very alternative in a good way, and nicely rendered, keep it up