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joacim_nitz
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 15, 2002 9:27 am     Reply with quote
Hi. First i must say. That im IMPRESSED by everyones work! Now my work...
I have painted this picture using Adobe Photoshop 7.0 and a wacom penn. I would like some comment. Im not sure if im done. Maybe i will add some cool magic effects and glows. Im not sure. The biggest problem i see in the picture is the jaw. Its rather big. But its maybe like manga look =) so.. its okey i think...???



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Beowulfthefallen
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Joined: 06 Jan 2002
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 15, 2002 10:57 am     Reply with quote
Nice pose! I really like the wings. Now, for some comments on it. The nose is fairly small compared to the lip and face. From the perspective, I'm not sure that we would see any of the actual eye or not. Kind of hard to explain. Your light source(s) confuse me since I have no idea where the light's coming from. Keep at it .
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Hase
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Joined: 15 Sep 2002
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Location: Austria

PostPosted: Sun Sep 15, 2002 12:07 pm     Reply with quote
Great clouds, the overall impression is good, but I�d have a look at some of the details.
The hands (the one on the right) and feet seem just a little too small, as well as the head... I�m not exactly sure what it is though, I think that the perspective of the jaw and the rest don�t quite match up (the face seems to look in the wrong direction, I think it�s also too flat, can�t quite put my finger on it though).
And those stripes of cloth sort of look like they�re sticking to the skin..
The wings look great, how�d you do them?
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keredleung
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Joined: 25 Jul 2002
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 15, 2002 12:16 pm     Reply with quote
yup. i like the cloud.
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