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RATBAT
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 08, 2002 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
before i started anouther page of my comic.
this is the nanomachine machina makenai, (origionaly called makinai).


ok before any of you guys say anything, let me adress some issues you might point out.
1. near the end of this, the inking started to get alittle bad. this is because, its very HARD for me to draw mecha, cause its hard for me to maintain perfect symmetry at all times. i tried my best to make it as accurate as my patience would allow. so if some pannels seem crooked or whatever. youl know why.
2. the gun barrels, i might go back and widden thos out. i made them small because i thought smaller calibur bullest would have fit the size of the bullet case on the arms. but people are telling me to make the barrels bigger. i might do this.
3. there is no cockpit. because makenai is alive, hes, a sentient mecha. A.I. based.
4. I preffer my mechas Blocky or sharp, i dont like curvy roundish mecha, if you like curvy mecha, you probibly wont like my mecha.
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Galo
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2002 1:27 am     Reply with quote
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ok before any of you guys say anything, let me adress some issues you might point out.
1. near the end of this, the inking started to get alittle bad. this is because, its very HARD for me to draw mecha, cause its hard for me to maintain perfect symmetry at all times. i tried my best to make it as accurate as my patience would allow. so if some pannels seem crooked or whatever. youl know why.
2. the gun barrels, i might go back and widden thos out. i made them small because i thought smaller calibur bullest would have fit the size of the bullet case on the arms. but people are telling me to make the barrels bigger. i might do this.
3. there is no cockpit. because makenai is alive, hes, a sentient mecha. A.I. based.
4. I preffer my mechas Blocky or sharp, i dont like curvy roundish mecha, if you like curvy mecha, you probibly wont like my mecha.



what the hell are you doing, that image is just fine man, don't give us exuses we wouldn't see in the first place,....what a shame, nice pic though

how do you manage to handle the perspectives like that they seem verry right to me...
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Jeise
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2002 2:14 pm     Reply with quote
Yes, very good Ratbat. IMO though Makenai's left foot should not point down that severely, but rather it should be flat at the bottom (or at least as flat as the right foot) and foreshortened more.

Have you posted this at the MMFT yet?
I'm sure I'll find out soon enough.
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Max
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2002 11:00 pm     Reply with quote
you just mentioned all

what can I say else

very beautiful
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