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-Gux-
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2002 2:42 pm     Reply with quote

Big
Wheeo... haven't posted here for ages.
Anyway, this was inspired by the background work in various animated movies. It was very different from anything I've done before, maybe that is apparent. C&C much welcomed.

[ August 25, 2002: Message edited by: -Gux- ]
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2002 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
at first you dont realize the boy is wearing beige shorts.

otherwise a pretty cool image.

thats one of those moments that strikes a chord with me.. I used to be a fighter jet fan when I was younger.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2002 4:32 pm     Reply with quote
this picture is really nice, but maybe you can work on the clouds a tad bit, and you could also replace the jets with a kite or something, to make it more natural, just a suggestion, otherwise, two thumbs up
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 5:17 am     Reply with quote
That looks really great.
I love the subject matter and the painting style suits it well.

My only suggestion would be to add a few more visual features such as maybe a tree or another boy. Or maybe even some subtle mountains in the background?

Other than that, I love it!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 9:04 am     Reply with quote
Awetopsy: Thanks! He'd be just as happy running around without shorts I think.

bouncemonster: Thank you. Actually I thought about adding kite first but jetplanes felt much cooler.

jasonN: I know what you mean, I really didn't plan the composition as carefully as I should have done. Thanks!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 9:14 am     Reply with quote
No keep the clouds the way they are I like the puffy clouds they look like two eggs in a hanky
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