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chao chin
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 Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2002 6:05 pm |
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hi.. i'm chao... i'm new here... i came to this website few days ago and.. woowww.. i saw many great artworks great comments and critiques!!... i still learn to draw until now.. so i have a lot of mistakes that i cna't see myself.. so.. if anybody care to give comments or critiques i'll be honored... thanks..
this is my concept character drawing... comments and critiques will be highly appreciated.. thanks again guys!
sorry for my bad english..
[ August 24, 2002: Message edited by: chao chin ]
[ August 24, 2002: Message edited by: chao chin ] |
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iByrn
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| Posted: Sat Aug 24, 2002 10:52 pm |
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The metal band on his shoulder looks too insubstantial and also looks like it's ready to fall off. And he looks like he has breasts because of that line defining the right side of his right pec. Erase that line or make it less pronounced and it should look fine.
Overall, nice use of the anime style. Looks good! |
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chao chin
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| Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2002 1:27 am |
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| thx a lot for your reply iByrn... strong and right in spot critiques there!! have to work and study more for next work! |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2002 2:39 am |
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Hey, and welcome!
This piece is great. I find your use of simplified tone really strenghtens your line work.
Keep at it mate, you have talent!
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work! |
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chao chin
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| Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 12:17 am |
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| thanks for your comments freddio!! i really appreciate it! |
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merlyns
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| Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 12:51 am |
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ow goody I love manga try too shade the hair a little bit more. besides that great picture.
welcome to the forum you gonna like it here (I hope).
-david |
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