[Christian Lang]

Another background for my First semester projekt. done in PS 6. It�s only 90 % finished. I think the flat buildings should go deeper into the distance, and the right and left corners are a little empty. C&C are welcome, although I have a very limited timeframe for changes,

[ZippZopp]

oh!! i love industrial stuff! great stuff you have here...go in and detail some more, it'll be so coool!

[Sukhoi]

Hi Christian.
I like the mood you're trying to convey aswell as the palette, but I see some problems.

There's a big problem regarding perspective. The rooftops should point towards the horizon. Also the building on the left is sort of sloping to the right.

If you have the time maybe add some highlight to the towers, play around with shadows, the sun and maybe even the smoke and the clouds.

But first and foremost fix the perspective.
Scott Robertson did some funky tutorials on the subject, perhaps look them up in the search engine.

Other than that. Good job and let's see some more

Sukhoi

[Jabo]

Pretty nice, I like the idea. Try to add contrast in lighting and brightness, I know that you try to cover the sun with smoke, but the area around the sun could need a brighter than the other parts!

[Christian Lang]

Thanks, Scotts Tutorial is great, I think It�ll help me a lot. I�m still very unexperienced with perspective, so I�ll try to get deep into that topic.