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Andromeda
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 Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 3:25 pm |
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I would love some critiques for this one.
And if anyone is nice enuff to do a simple paintover, it would be very much appreciated. Im still learning, so i bet theres a thousand and one mistakes in there i cant spot.
And a little closeup for my darlings. =]
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badoli
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| Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2002 5:32 pm |
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| Light on the fist looks a bit too unclear. If it is just for the pose, you should arrange the light around it. With other words: As the fist with the pointing finger is a major weight in the picture, you should also put more emphasis on it considering your given light situation. |
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 12:47 pm |
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now that youve mentioned it ...
i did leave out a lot of details from his pointing hand. =\ ... |
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Drawnblud
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| Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2002 8:33 pm |
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| I think this is one of the best pieces I have seen in a great while!! The dynamics of this look great, like a still frame from a movie!!! |
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Finer
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| Posted: Thu Aug 22, 2002 4:55 am |
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cool pic, heres an overpaint
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Thu Aug 22, 2002 8:07 am |
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OMG ...
yes yes ... first thing i noticed was how i messed up the shadow underneath his pointing arm ... the shadow cast on the thigh.
somehow deep down i can feel that the whole image is supposed to be darker becos of the light from behind ... but i just cant bring myself to paint it darker ..
have you ever felt that way, you just want so much details in, that you purposely mess up the lighting ... HOPING no one would notice... lol
[EDIT: "Thanks a lot for the Overpaint Finer. I checked out your website, your works are excellent ! I especially like 'gal015.jpg', very surreal .... think i remember that one being posted on sijun sometime back...  i dunno, my memory is not that good."]
[ August 22, 2002: Message edited by: Andromeda[*] ] |
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