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JProvost
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 Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 9:25 am |
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Something I've been moving to and from the back burner for a while now. It was originally drawn out to be a full body, but I got bored of working on it. I showed a friend a detail of the jacket and he suggested just cropping it like that.
Let me know what you think. |
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oDD
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| Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 1:32 pm |
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pretty cool, i like it.
The only think that doesn't work is the city in the background.
(Maybe make her stading by the fance and some ocean in the background (!?)) |
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Hyptosis
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| Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 5:40 pm |
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| JP turned out good, last time i saw it hadn't anymore than the shirt, good work man. |
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Max
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| Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 1:05 am |
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I love your clean style JProvost
The clothes are beautiful and I like this cute pose...
- max
[ August 19, 2002: Message edited by: Max Kulich ] |
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Enayla
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| Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 4:16 am |
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Gorgeous, gorgeous work.
I'm not too fond of the simple outlines of the buildings, though... I feel that they might take away from the rest of it, but that is just a personal opinion. Splendid stuff.  |
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eyewoo
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| Posted: Mon Aug 19, 2002 4:45 am |
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| Yes... I like the way it's cropped. But the background does look incomplete. The buildings don't need great detail, but something to make them look less like cardboard cutouts. |
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