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kanex
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Joined: 10 Nov 2001
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Location: France

PostPosted: Sat Aug 17, 2002 12:10 pm     Reply with quote
Thanx to Kanex,

I use this log to introduce my new feature. You're now able to se my movie which is titled "La piece" (sorry it's french...).

Hope u'll like it.
http://daroom.free.fr http://daroom.free.fr/lapiece.avi

ruskov
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Matt Ryan
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Joined: 26 Sep 2000
Posts: 194
Location: Fullerton CA USA

PostPosted: Sat Aug 17, 2002 11:44 pm     Reply with quote
wow... that is a very impressive piece. you have a wonderful visual style, and i love the muptiple angle scences. i only wish i knew french .

my favorite aspect of the film is all the still images, which you morph with other still images i assume to get that motion. the silent film part is nice as well. overall the lighting is pretty good, although i think it could be a bit darker. the materials/textures are very nice. his has looks fuzzy, the floor looks dusty and the walls look dirty! very nice indeed.

i wasnt really impressed with the main characters model.. seemed kinda generic, and it looked like you didnt texture him, or use specular or bump maps. also i think the animation is a good start but needs alot of work.he has that kinda "sliding" quality, as if he half iceskates/walks, know what i mean. he seems very rigid and stiff, not that way sicko , and he totally lacks secondary animation and facial animation which are key in order to make characters realistic. i also noticed his joints looked like rubber. our joints are very mechnical in nature and dont bend like putty , look into that more. and watch out for clipping (stuff going through stuff, which isnt supposed to happen, e.g. hand through desk, jacket through leg) you can add great realism if you deform the two solids properly, if u get my meaning.

well, keep up the wonderful work and take these points into consideration on your next project. cya
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eyewoo
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Joined: 23 Jun 2001
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Location: Carbondale, CO

PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 5:51 am     Reply with quote
I really enjoyed it and I don't understand French - it was French, right...

I sent the link to a friend in LA...
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Rage_For_Me
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Joined: 02 Jun 2002
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Location: California

PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 5:26 pm     Reply with quote
WOW! That is one of the most exquisite pieces I have ever watched. If I leave you my email ([email protected]) would you please email me with any updates you ever make? Any other videos or anything�. Because I do not want to miss a single post. WOW! �.simply�. WOW!
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FFNeX
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Location: Miami, FL, USA

PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2002 9:24 pm     Reply with quote
This would be one of the best animated features I have ever seen if the the models had a much higher polycount (both characters and environments), facial animation and there was no clipping. Also if it had subtitles so I can understand what they are saying. The idea is the coolest thing, but I would really work a little bit more on the models and animation. You are on the right track though, keep it up.
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